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Broken
You know I didn't quite get it
I wasn't quite prepared
When you told me you don't want me
When you told me you didn't care
Perhaps that's why I find it
Incredibly hard to believe
That someone on this earth
Would ever want me
When you told me you didn't want me
You spoke for everyone else
It makes it difficult to find love
And even tougher to love myself
You've made me a negative person
Its impossible to see the good
Even though I know it exists
For me I know it never could
Happiness never lasts too long
Somehow it always dies
I've learned never to expect too much
For faith is always unwise
It brings disappointment and depression
Emotions I know all too well
You see they've become who I am
I have become my own hell
Maybe I shouldn't blame you,
Take responsibility of my life
However it's complicated to do so
When there's no closure for this strife
This wound just keeps bleeding
I doubt it will ever heal
Time will not fix this one
And time cannot conceal
The scars that you have left me
Will be with me till I perish
Forever your broken 'daughter'
Who you could never truly cherish
At least you have a replacement
You can do it right this time
I hope she gives you enough love
Because you'll never have mine
You know I didn't quite get it
I wasn't quite prepared
When you told me you don't want me
When you told me you didn't care
Perhaps that's why I find it
Incredibly hard to believe
That someone on this earth
Would ever want me
When you told me you didn't want me
You spoke for everyone else
It makes it difficult to find love
And even tougher to love myself
You've made me a negative person
Its impossible to see the good
Even though I know it exists
For me I know it never could
Happiness never lasts too long
Somehow it always dies
I've learned never to expect too much
For faith is always unwise
It brings disappointment and depression
Emotions I know all too well
You see they've become who I am
I have become my own hell
Maybe I shouldn't blame you,
Take responsibility of my life
However it's complicated to do so
When there's no closure for this strife
This wound just keeps bleeding
I doubt it will ever heal
Time will not fix this one
And time cannot conceal
The scars that you have left me
Will be with me till I perish
Forever your broken 'daughter'
Who you could never truly cherish
At least you have a replacement
You can do it right this time
I hope she gives you enough love
Because you'll never have mine
Another poem about my dad that I wrote when I was feeling really down
© 2015 - 2024 Blue-eyed-girl-23
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touch me deep inside so badly........I would like to say a lot of things ....but I don't think I have the right......talking about the poetry of course looks something unique with so much feelings......impossible don't feel moved by your words......and thinking was made by you......make me really sad.....for you be a nice person.....and I am not trying be polite.....you really are....and if one person can't love you......I hope all people around you love you as much as you deserve........
I admire your delicate heart and the beauty of your soul........and even if your wounds will never heal......deep inside you....you keep not only all that negative feelings that make you feel so sad.....even if all that could be a part of you.....I like you for the whole person you are my friend......we all have our own wounds and negative feelings........and the fact you are still facing all days being the wonderful person you are....even with all that feelings deep inside......amke me so proud of you.....a big hug for you my friend.....you are a special ....unique person.....and nothing will change it......even with so much pain.....you still are lovely and kind
I admire your delicate heart and the beauty of your soul........and even if your wounds will never heal......deep inside you....you keep not only all that negative feelings that make you feel so sad.....even if all that could be a part of you.....I like you for the whole person you are my friend......we all have our own wounds and negative feelings........and the fact you are still facing all days being the wonderful person you are....even with all that feelings deep inside......amke me so proud of you.....a big hug for you my friend.....you are a special ....unique person.....and nothing will change it......even with so much pain.....you still are lovely and kind